Grant Editing- FAST, Neighborhood Matching Fund

A short excerpt from a longer application to Seattle's Neighborhood Matching Fund, I edited material provided by the fund-seeking organization for clarity and also contributed original copy to the application (not shown). This application was successful in raising $31,000 for FAST's programs. In this sample, you'll find the original copy followed by my markup and a clean version of the excerpt. 

Editing Sample-Young Adult Fiction

This is an excerpt from the novel, Lutina and the Dragon by Brande Damiana. I was asked to perform a copy edit for mechanical and grammar issues as well as a substantive edit for issues of character development, continuity, and clarity. The GoogleDoc below contains the unedited copy, a version of the text with suggestions visible via Track Changes, and a clean version of the document.